Peer feedback LIIAR analysis:
By Naomi Buckley-
Time management- I think you have done well but I would have
tried to get a couple of sentences down for the double page spread and the
content.
Areas to improve- I think in the language bit when you said about
the colour scheme fitting in well I think you should have said what it links in
with because I was a bit confused. I would add when you say about the feature
story been on a tilt - “her head is also on a tilt so it’s like that bit is her
looking at it” or something along the lines to show that the magazine is
addressing us and the person in the magazine.
What they have done well – your language skills are really
good J
Lauren Schofield
Time management: you have written a lot about the language
and institution on the front cover but could spend some time at home to finish
the LIIAR analysis of the front cover and do the content and double page
spread.
Areas to improve: finish the analysisJ you need to
Areas done well: you have used good language skill
To improve I will add some more
description to the language analysis of my front cover. I will also finish my
LIIAR analysis and improve my time management skills so I can complete work
quicker. I will continue to use good language skills and terminology.
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